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A day in the life of a cat (1/9)

 

Peer Ariane

Peer Ariane

Montag, 10. Dezember 2018

Sprache: English

Thema:

Creative writing
 

I get up as soon as I hear birds chirping outside, that’s usually around 5am. I will have to catch up on sleep later but right now, I want to know what this new smell is. I’m strolling through the flat on the lookout for something unusual but I haven’t come across anything yet… Does the smell come from that box up there? Jumping on the counter I once more wonder about the clumsiness of humans, but at least I don’t have to go on the hunt for food.

 

5 Kommentare

1 Comment from rossi cat

13.12.2018 13:36

Short but realistic. Good job!
 
 

2 Kommentar von Roschatt Hannes

13.12.2018 17:52

Lovely storyline and great descriptions. It would even fit imagine it was my cat :))
 
 

3 Comment from Lara B.

13.12.2018 19:19

I love the story and it's like you are really in his thoughts and see the world from the cats perspective.
 
 

4 Comment from marlea

13.12.2018 20:08

good job! We think the toughts of the cat are very realistic and interesting.
 
 

5 Comment from Jani

17.12.2018 00:18

Nice story with a variety of vocabulary, a bit short but still a fascinating plot!
 
 

Comment from marlea

good job! We think the toughts of the cat are very realistic and interesting.

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